tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post4249756614576077391..comments2023-10-12T20:59:49.473+07:00Comments on Elephant Small: WI Questionable, Coercion, AwakeningStan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-55678032834416294272008-06-26T18:12:00.000+07:002008-06-26T18:12:00.000+07:00Many thanks to:Andy; Hopes, fears, doubts. Some qu...Many thanks to:<BR/>Andy; Hopes, fears, doubts. Some questions remain unanswered, but it does no harm to be optimistic, where appropriate.<BR/>rebecca; As I siad earlier,; ponder for sure, but don't dwell.<BR/>one more believer; When you weigh things up, you get a better sense of direction. Following that path, isn't always easy.<BR/>constance; Even if we're not actually coerced into things, we often still look for a scapegoat. It's always someone else's fault.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-3744658254112502312008-06-26T10:46:00.000+07:002008-06-26T10:46:00.000+07:00these three poems work well together - even read a...these three poems work well together - even read as one continuous poem. I found this line very telling - "Would that you could allow me"Constance Brewerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17964121072645959593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-79882865369201483282008-06-26T06:25:00.000+07:002008-06-26T06:25:00.000+07:00..it is as thoughtful stepping stones as we pass t.....it is as thoughtful stepping stones as we pass through life... the format was awesome and really added to the strength of your words...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-79294430169029706832008-06-26T03:58:00.000+07:002008-06-26T03:58:00.000+07:00many good questions stan.... so many things to def...many good questions stan.... so many things to definitely ponder.<BR/><BR/>personally, i couldn't say which i liked best since i found each to be really good in its own right.rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-44022749733824326402008-06-25T19:37:00.000+07:002008-06-25T19:37:00.000+07:00Hi Stan, Really liked all three, the answer is 'th...Hi Stan, Really liked all three, the answer is 'that all will be revealed' in the first one. <BR/>Like your take on the old 'would, could, should' theme.<BR/>And the positive ending in 'More to Life?'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-53914745850510352632008-06-24T08:28:00.000+07:002008-06-24T08:28:00.000+07:00Thanks greyscale territory; Not sure if it's just ...Thanks greyscale territory; Not sure if it's just me but I'm having difficulty now posting comments to your blog. I have tried unsuccessfully on several occasions. However, sometimes I can just go ahead, no problem.<BR/>I liked the photo/word unity of the corellia but was unable to let you know.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-7123217031799236612008-06-23T16:31:00.000+07:002008-06-23T16:31:00.000+07:00O what a tangled web we weave when we bein the rol...O what a tangled web we weave when we bein the rollercoaster of "what if" questions. You capture that conundrum well.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-90448194356485099742008-06-22T16:34:00.000+07:002008-06-22T16:34:00.000+07:00Thanks to:anthony north; Paranoia for sure. Maybe ...Thanks to:<BR/>anthony north; Paranoia for sure. Maybe more so if I attempted to provide the answers.<BR/>just jen; Think, but not dwell. A lot of questions will forever remain unanswered.<BR/>keiths ramblings; And I think verse is the best outlet for questions, wheras prose is more for answers & explanations.<BR/>jeques; Ignorance isn't bliss - it's pure puragatory. Alas, purgatory may be the very place we discover the answers.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-62119814493468125962008-06-22T07:23:00.000+07:002008-06-22T07:23:00.000+07:00I like how you put together the questions that hum...I like how you put together the questions that humanity had been asking generation after generation in this three poems ~ we may not find the solid answers but isn't questioning prod us to find the answers. One day soon, perhaps.<BR/><BR/>Your poem succeed to make your readers think.<BR/><BR/>I wish you well.<BR/><BR/>~ JequesJequeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02379256666172458498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-10434478261803993032008-06-21T21:18:00.000+07:002008-06-21T21:18:00.000+07:00i love the stacatto rhythm which you give your poe...i love the stacatto rhythm which you give your poety. And I like them all!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-91387924020632773492008-06-21T16:48:00.000+07:002008-06-21T16:48:00.000+07:00A strong sense of paranoia in these, I thought. Th...A strong sense of paranoia in these, I thought. That, and all the questions of importance.<BR/>I loved them - especially the first one.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com