tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post3917532600449941341..comments2023-10-12T20:59:49.473+07:00Comments on Elephant Small: A FEARFUL TRILLStan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-59777974002670831682010-05-17T09:16:07.678+07:002010-05-17T09:16:07.678+07:00Thanks to:
Briarcat; Sometimes, even people we kno...Thanks to:<br />Briarcat; Sometimes, even people we know best seem to speak a foreign language.<br />Wayne; I think the end product works about right.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-17393572972264275642010-05-17T07:06:01.342+07:002010-05-17T07:06:01.342+07:00nice job shuffling those......thanks for sharing t...nice job shuffling those......thanks for sharing this StanWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-73310520743066879532010-05-16T01:02:25.037+07:002010-05-16T01:02:25.037+07:00There's a great little jazz ditty--"If I ...There's a great little jazz ditty--"If I Spoke French"<br />*wistfully*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-40575050582757957682010-05-14T08:51:46.601+07:002010-05-14T08:51:46.601+07:00Thanks JDM; I spent quite a long time piecing it t...Thanks JDM; I spent quite a long time piecing it together - though probably mot as much as the likes of Cohen and Beckett.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-74487949711619851402010-05-14T08:41:53.438+07:002010-05-14T08:41:53.438+07:00Stan, I found the first read interesting but got t...Stan, I found the first read interesting but got to your references and then it all got really interesting enough for a second and third read. I'll raise a glass to any poet who can co-mingle Cohen, Eminem and Mick. Cheers!J. D. Mackenziehttp://jdmackenzie.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-25389732363518137442010-05-14T07:23:25.799+07:002010-05-14T07:23:25.799+07:00Thanks Paul; It took several drafts before I settl...Thanks Paul; It took several drafts before I settled on this.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-23851951994884652992010-05-14T01:12:04.948+07:002010-05-14T01:12:04.948+07:00When I first saw the structure, I had my doubts. B...When I first saw the structure, I had my doubts. But this is amazing! Great stuff, Stan!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-79762512769076532422010-05-13T06:25:41.218+07:002010-05-13T06:25:41.218+07:00Thanks to:
Pamela; Great prompt to work with.
Jing...Thanks to:<br />Pamela; Great prompt to work with.<br />Jingle; I'll check it out.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-47707329168360894852010-05-12T22:02:44.014+07:002010-05-12T22:02:44.014+07:00Love what you did with this prompt. Nice!
PamelaLove what you did with this prompt. Nice!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-21702997176665152052010-05-12T18:16:47.732+07:002010-05-12T18:16:47.732+07:00Thanks Derrick; That's not all I do - I also s...Thanks Derrick; That's not all I do - I also sleep, eat and get drunk, innit...<br />and a whole 2 lines of this are all my own work...!Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-17546208574235290322010-05-12T18:09:53.365+07:002010-05-12T18:09:53.365+07:00So all you do is listen to music, TV and read poet...So all you do is listen to music, TV and read poetry, eh Stan?! Clever blending. I was reduced to interspersing my own words! And 'summat' is a wonderful word!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-73982914279623833122010-05-12T16:22:22.809+07:002010-05-12T16:22:22.809+07:00Thanks Andy; Que'tchose comme ca - A Pas De Ca...Thanks Andy; Que'tchose comme ca - A Pas De Calais resident said that's how locals say quelquechose (something). I guess it best translates to 'summat'.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-20528011888643167892010-05-12T16:10:58.565+07:002010-05-12T16:10:58.565+07:00Merci bien, Monsewer, or summat like that.
Cool p...Merci bien, Monsewer, or summat like that.<br /><br />Cool post Stan!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-85030797008934357602010-05-12T10:43:30.708+07:002010-05-12T10:43:30.708+07:00Thanks Rallentanda; I had to keep shuffling the qu...Thanks Rallentanda; I had to keep shuffling the quotations until I was satisfied with the result... Les mots justes...?Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-85300816842821651562010-05-12T10:21:48.410+07:002010-05-12T10:21:48.410+07:00Wow! Your references are so interesting . This wor...Wow! Your references are so interesting . This worked very well indeed. Thanks for contributing such a good poem.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.com